Fic: My sun was always setting (drabble, Doctor Who)

[primsong.livejournal.com]

I just realized I do have another little piece to contribute to the effort, a drabble for Susan while she was still at Coal Hill school. The Doctor may have never looked back, but that doesn't mean Susan didn't.

Title: My Sun was Always Setting
Fandom: Doctor Who, First Doctor era
Rating: G
Characters: Barbara, Susan
Author: primsong
Wordcount: 100
Summary: There's no sky like that of your childhood.


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The girl was in the library again. Barbara Wright quietly opened the door. “Susan,” she called. “It’s time to go home. The building is being locked up for the night.”

Susan Foreman looked back at her with a detached, strangely dreamy look on her face. “Have you seen the sunset?” she asked.

Barbara frowned, but joined her by the window. “Very pretty,” she observed.

“The colours here are so different,” Susan said softly. “I do like the blue. But the orange of the sunset…”

Miss Wright looked askance at her faraway eyes, curious. “Yes?”

“It makes me so very homesick.”

Comments

[mtgat]

Oh Susan. *snuggles her*

[primsong.livejournal.com]

I wonder if she ever asked to go back...

[senmut (from livejournal.com)]

Wonderful!

[primsong.livejournal.com]

Thank you - Susan really doesn't get nearly enough attention in fic.

[minerva-fan.livejournal.com]

Oh, that is GORGEOUS. Lovely job of packing so much into so few words.

[primsong.livejournal.com]

Thank you - drabbles do take a bit of shoehorning, it's nice when they manage to emerge without being stilted.

[pinkdormouse.livejournal.com]

Oh, Susan!